Sing of all my broken dreams
And all I could have done and been
Sing of all those wasted chances
And the people I wont prove wrong
But you need
30 more years
Of bitterness and disappointment before you can be talking like that my girl
Yes you need
30 more years
Of being less than you can be before you can really
Complain
And you need
30 odd years
Of dying inside every time you think I should have
Yes you need
30 more years
Of getting up in the morning and knowing that life goes on
Sing of all the times I tried,
And fell, my face down in the mud
Again, againm feel failures sting
Like endless stab wounds to the heart
But you need
30 more years
Of bitterness and disappointment before you can be talking like that my girl
Yes you need
30 more years
Of being less than you can be before you can really
Complain
And you need
30 odd years
Of dying inside every time you think I should have
Yes you need
30 more years
Of getting up in the morning and knowing that life goes on
Through this failure I discover
I may have lost one self but I have found another
Despite the wounds my heart remains
Intact
And it has found its voice
Everything Ive been and am all comes together in this writing hand
All the pieces fit together
And I know that nothing can ever
Take this from me
So
Sing of all my broken dreams
And all I could have done and been
Sing of all the wasted chances
And the people I wont prove wrong
Sing of shame, then recantation
Sing of loss, reconciliation
Sing, sing, sing, sing














Comments
I ought to write a song.... I haven't done so in quite some time. (although I have about six half-finished poems)
I like this. (more on topic now) it makes me feel much more optimistic!!!
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~OTP~
Either way, this is amazing - and let's face it; no-one, especially no kind of artist, is normal (who wants to be?). If we were, we would probably have very real, terrible limits in our inspiration and portrayal!
Singing really is the best way to process feelings verbally, I think - especially if nostalgia and hopes are combined. I got the impression that it could be a song sung by a teenage girls' mother who is looking back on her own experiences - both those done and chances not taken - effectivley saying to her child "don't look down on me as an incomprehensive parent who doesn't understand, 'cos I've seen more of life than you". I may be totally off-topic, but that's what came to me.
Anyway, I love it.
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Strength to thy soul and wind to thy wings.
Sunlight to walk in,
moonlight to dance in,
starry skies to gaze upon.
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Everything I've been and am all comes together in this writing hand...
What is "normal" anyway?
Your interpretation is close, but not quite, what I orginally intended but has the right feelings and themes about it. I'm glad that you have this interpretation and choose to share it with me. Thankyou.
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Everything I've been and am all comes together in this writing hand...
yay uplifting...ness.
(I am none too coherent today)
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~OTP~
Lovely as always 'Ulia.
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When life gives you lemons, throw them at the non believers.
"Slugs are just snails that have been mugged by other snails."
Glad I was close and you liked the theory... I'll have to dig my brain a bit more.
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Strength to thy soul and wind to thy wings.
Sunlight to walk in,
moonlight to dance in,
starry skies to gaze upon.
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Everything I've been and am all comes together in this writing hand...
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When life gives you lemons, throw them at the non believers.
"Slugs are just snails that have been mugged by other snails."
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