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Polarity

Can you feel it between us?
Things could get…interesting.
Like and unlike are we.
Rivals. Equals. Enemies. Compeers.
Opposite numbers.

O yes you feign superiority.
You treat me like I’m below you, no different.
And yet you fear me.
You sense there is more in this glitter behind my eyes. You sense my power.
You respect and despise me.

O yes I feign superiority.
Laugh at your ignorance and oblviousness.
You crawled back, little stupid pathetic girl-baby and I call you weak.

You are weak and I am ugly. We are right.
You are ugly and I am weak.

So similar, so different.

Jealousy, grudging praise, emulation, opposition, rivalry, equality, acknowledgement.
Dark and fair.
Slut and nerd.
Light and darkness.
Whore and piety.
Both within the two of us, connected, our Duality, our Polarity.

My rival, my alter-ego, my equal, my enemy, my compeer.

My Opposite Number.
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Author's Comments

Nothing much to say on this one except I used alot of long words... and if you can understand all of this without looking at a dictionary you are smarter than I am XD
And the category system on DA is rubbish. I would not classify this as "open" myself but there was nothing else that fit.

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:iconphreak-of-nature:
The contrasts and comparisons are nicely done. I especially like the second and third stanza where the subject accuses superiority and then admits the same.
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whoa.... I love the amount of contrast. :+fav: Post more like this! It really gets me thinking.
(yes I understood it woohoo)

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The third stanza was well written.
Keep it going :)

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November 17, 2007
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